Yeah thanks mate. There is some issues with timing I agree. I will try refine it but obviously you don't want to have too much text on screen at once and his speech pattern is all over the place. Sometimes fast with no gaps and sometimes super slow. So it's a balance of making way for the next sentence without losing pace sometimes.
There's some other thing s I want to fix. The line "what we put in the draft transfer contract" didn't render correctly.
Plus there is no consistency with quotation marks.
I got to late last night and just wanted to get it out first. But I will re-look at it shortly.